Seduction

This here is peace of mind;

Really it’s a piece of mine

My father & and sister don’t like it

But I posted it

You can say I pissed off mine

I left them already anyways

To cleave;

To the one who clears my airways

I breathe;

Inhale the purity of her scent

Indeed,

‘Take her hand’ He says;

‘Take it in want; not need’

Let me speak to her being

Probably she’s spent many a year

Just ‘being’

I did time too; lonely within

She didn’t give up on men though

Check the scene!

Was her flawed knight in shinning

Now cleaned up my thing

She tough too; don’t trip, she’s been carrying the weight

I’ll remind her she’s a woman; you just wait

Flirt with her senses; stir up her spirits

Put laughter in her heart till she’s giddy

Her shoulders relax; with words I massage;

A mending message into the core of her baggage

Watch me carry the weight

Of her breasts – sorry I mean chest

Pay no attention to her behind,

Focus on what’s in front;

Build us a future together; it’ll be backwards

to front

Touch; tease her lips till the right words she speaks

Moans, groans, screams – what a release it’ll be!

Lubricate her mind with these skilled fingers of mine

Like the age old Cassanova in bed; I mime

Have to slow down; feeling some kind of wet,

Of tears, her period or something else..?

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SEDUCTION

51 thoughts on “Seduction

  1. Hmmmmmmmm!!!! Dis ɪ̣̝̇ƨ̣̣̣̇̇̇̇ really seductive.. ♍ε̲̣̣̣̥ likeyyy *evil smile* God bless ɣ☺ΰ and bless ur hands Seun

  2. Hehehehe. Seuuuunnnnn, I want to hope you’re not writing from “experience” sha ooooo. Never mind, this piece is good. Subject is developed carefully, and your pus (play upon senses) is magical. Good work here. But I’m annnngrrrrryyyy that I didn’t get a mention. So would u have allowed me missss thisssss?????

      1. i’m sure you didn’t get that @Mind Fucking….its a term i give to manipulating someone mentality and subtly like u described in this piece.

        its a skill and technique that when mastered can bring about different result…and not just with seduction.

  3. I agree with phonicphoenix, its simple & subtle. Creative,too.
    Me like this;
    “To cleave;
    To the one who clears my airways.”

  4. Now that’s the SH**t ! you making it right with wit them words Mr Odukoya….seriously taking care of bizz 🙂

    Definitely all the right words, beautiful intentions and purely acceptable on every level…freakish!

  5. This is really creative depicting perfectly the whole seduction concept, I’m totally awed! The word play’s amazing! Was reveling in the rhythmic flow of this masterpiece till I got to the final two lines and I froze! You just had to throw in ‘her period’ didn’t you?! Gross! Lolz.

      1. Sue me! Question or not, imagination notwithstanding, that right there’s a MAJOR dealbreaker! A spoiler! Oga Sir! *scoffing* LMAO!

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