This here is peace of mind;
Really it’s a piece of mine
My father & and sister don’t like it
But I posted it
You can say I pissed off mine
I left them already anyways
To cleave;
To the one who clears my airways
I breathe;
Inhale the purity of her scent
Indeed,
‘Take her hand’ He says;
‘Take it in want; not need’
Let me speak to her being
Probably she’s spent many a year
Just ‘being’
I did time too; lonely within
She didn’t give up on men though
Check the scene!
Was her flawed knight in shinning
Now cleaned up my thing
She tough too; don’t trip, she’s been carrying the weight
I’ll remind her she’s a woman; you just wait
Flirt with her senses; stir up her spirits
Put laughter in her heart till she’s giddy
Her shoulders relax; with words I massage;
A mending message into the core of her baggage
Watch me carry the weight
Of her breasts – sorry I mean chest
Pay no attention to her behind,
Focus on what’s in front;
Build us a future together; it’ll be backwards
to front
Touch; tease her lips till the right words she speaks
Moans, groans, screams – what a release it’ll be!
Lubricate her mind with these skilled fingers of mine
Like the age old Cassanova in bed; I mime
Have to slow down; feeling some kind of wet,
Of tears, her period or something else..?
SEDUCTION
Hmmmmmmmm!!!! Dis ɪ̣̝̇ƨ̣̣̣̇̇̇̇ really seductive.. ♍ε̲̣̣̣̥ likeyyy *evil smile* God bless ɣ☺ΰ and bless ur hands Seun
Amen. Thank you much!
*Clears throat* *Clears throat again*
Pele.
Here’s Baba Blue!
Hehehehe. Seuuuunnnnn, I want to hope you’re not writing from “experience” sha ooooo. Never mind, this piece is good. Subject is developed carefully, and your pus (play upon senses) is magical. Good work here. But I’m annnngrrrrryyyy that I didn’t get a mention. So would u have allowed me missss thisssss?????
I apologize! Oversight!
Thank you so much.
hmm…..Yea, bless those hands. *Mind Fucking*
Er. Okay.
Thank you sir!
i’m sure you didn’t get that @Mind Fucking….its a term i give to manipulating someone mentality and subtly like u described in this piece.
its a skill and technique that when mastered can bring about different result…and not just with seduction.
I’m sure I got it sir, but thank you for explaining!
—Her shoulders relax, with words I massage— hmm….. I love this line.
Thank you sir!
Absolutely seductive
Absolutely grateful!
The weight of that lady’s breast must be…
*lips sealed*
And the behind must be….?
*clears throat*
To enjoy the cleave…and what comes with it.
Hehehehehehehe! Yes o!
Thank you Chemo.
brilliant. Dirty naughty but brilliant.
Ah. Thank you ma!
Dirty boy….fingering with our imagination and wetting our thoughts with slippery creativity.
Is that what I did?
Thank you Afro!
*sigh* Okaaaaayyyy.
Thankssssss
It’s ga ju.
E se ma!
Simple…good dictions…nice piece! Subtle too!
Thank you much!
Badt Boy Seun!
Thank you for coming, Di.
I agree with phonicphoenix, its simple & subtle. Creative,too.
Me like this;
“To cleave;
To the one who clears my airways.”
Thank you ma’am!
Thank you.
Ahem! Seun Odukoya… ahem!
Hehehehehehe!
Now that’s the SH**t ! you making it right with wit them words Mr Odukoya….seriously taking care of bizz 🙂
Definitely all the right words, beautiful intentions and purely acceptable on every level…freakish!
Thank you so much ma’am.
Reblogged this on DottaRaphels and commented:
THIS IS THE DEAL LADIES,SAVOR……
Just had to share the pleasure…reblogged Sir with permission?
Like I would deny you that…
Thank you so much. For so much.
Fab 🙂
Thank you Helen!
Seductive prose and photo…such a great post. Sigh…
Whoa. Thank you!
I read Just Another Love Story this morning and thought how beautiful. Now I read this and I’m like what do I say……except….can I lick your brain?
Er…why evuls tho?!
I appreciate the sentiment! Thank you!
I doff my hat..
Thank you top!
Choi! See poem … see pic! I gbadu your style of writing.
THanks man.
This is really creative depicting perfectly the whole seduction concept, I’m totally awed! The word play’s amazing! Was reveling in the rhythmic flow of this masterpiece till I got to the final two lines and I froze! You just had to throw in ‘her period’ didn’t you?! Gross! Lolz.
A question, madame! Blame your imagination.
Thanks as always!
Sue me! Question or not, imagination notwithstanding, that right there’s a MAJOR dealbreaker! A spoiler! Oga Sir! *scoffing* LMAO!
Sorry madam!