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This here is peace of mind;

Really it’s a piece of mine

My father & and sister don’t like it

But I posted it

You can say I pissed off mine

I left them already anyways

To cleave;

To the one who clears my airways

I breathe;

Inhale the purity of her scent


‘Take her hand’ He says;

‘Take it in want; not need’

Let me speak to her being

Probably she’s spent many a year

Just ‘being’

I did time too; lonely within

She didn’t give up on men though

Check the scene!

Was her flawed knight in shinning

Now cleaned up my thing

She tough too; don’t trip, she’s been carrying the weight

I’ll remind her she’s a woman; you just wait

Flirt with her senses; stir up her spirits

Put laughter in her heart till she’s giddy

Her shoulders relax; with words I massage;

A mending message into the core of her baggage

Watch me carry the weight

Of her breasts – sorry I mean chest

Pay no attention to her behind,

Focus on what’s in front;

Build us a future together; it’ll be backwards

to front

Touch; tease her lips till the right words she speaks

Moans, groans, screams – what a release it’ll be!

Lubricate her mind with these skilled fingers of mine

Like the age old Cassanova in bed; I mime

Have to slow down; feeling some kind of wet,

Of tears, her period or something else..?




51 responses

  1. jane

    Hmmmmmmmm!!!! Dis ɪ̣̝̇ƨ̣̣̣̇̇̇̇ really seductive.. ♍ε̲̣̣̣̥ likeyyy *evil smile* God bless ɣ☺ΰ and bless ur hands Seun

    September 6, 2013 at 6:57 am

  2. *Clears throat* *Clears throat again*

    September 6, 2013 at 7:09 am

  3. Hehehehe. Seuuuunnnnn, I want to hope you’re not writing from “experience” sha ooooo. Never mind, this piece is good. Subject is developed carefully, and your pus (play upon senses) is magical. Good work here. But I’m annnngrrrrryyyy that I didn’t get a mention. So would u have allowed me missss thisssss?????

    September 6, 2013 at 7:17 am

    • I apologize! Oversight!

      Thank you so much.

      September 6, 2013 at 7:27 am

  4. hmm…..Yea, bless those hands. *Mind Fucking*

    September 6, 2013 at 7:35 am

    • Er. Okay.

      Thank you sir!

      September 6, 2013 at 7:59 am

      • i’m sure you didn’t get that @Mind Fucking….its a term i give to manipulating someone mentality and subtly like u described in this piece.

        its a skill and technique that when mastered can bring about different result…and not just with seduction.

        September 7, 2013 at 1:58 pm

      • I’m sure I got it sir, but thank you for explaining!

        September 7, 2013 at 2:54 pm

  5. —Her shoulders relax, with words I massage— hmm….. I love this line.

    September 6, 2013 at 7:37 am

  6. Planet Sting

    Absolutely seductive

    September 6, 2013 at 7:41 am

  7. The weight of that lady’s breast must be…

    *lips sealed*

    And the behind must be….?

    *clears throat*

    To enjoy the cleave…and what comes with it.

    September 6, 2013 at 8:00 am

    • Hehehehehehehe! Yes o!

      Thank you Chemo.

      September 6, 2013 at 8:03 am

  8. brilliant. Dirty naughty but brilliant.

    September 6, 2013 at 9:09 am

  9. Dirty boy….fingering with our imagination and wetting our thoughts with slippery creativity.

    September 6, 2013 at 9:09 am

    • Is that what I did?

      Thank you Afro!

      September 6, 2013 at 9:29 am

  10. *sigh* Okaaaaayyyy.

    September 6, 2013 at 9:31 am

  11. It’s ga ju.

    September 6, 2013 at 9:32 am

  12. Simple…good dictions…nice piece! Subtle too!

    September 6, 2013 at 11:07 am

  13. Badt Boy Seun!

    September 6, 2013 at 11:25 am

  14. Gloire

    I agree with phonicphoenix, its simple & subtle. Creative,too.
    Me like this;
    “To cleave;
    To the one who clears my airways.”

    September 6, 2013 at 1:22 pm

  15. Ahem! Seun Odukoya… ahem!

    September 6, 2013 at 6:25 pm

  16. Now that’s the SH**t ! you making it right with wit them words Mr Odukoya….seriously taking care of bizz 🙂

    Definitely all the right words, beautiful intentions and purely acceptable on every level…freakish!

    September 6, 2013 at 10:18 pm

  17. Reblogged this on DottaRaphels and commented:

    September 6, 2013 at 10:19 pm

  18. Just had to share the pleasure…reblogged Sir with permission?

    September 6, 2013 at 10:22 pm

    • Like I would deny you that…

      Thank you so much. For so much.

      September 7, 2013 at 8:16 am

  19. Fab 🙂

    September 6, 2013 at 11:00 pm

  20. Seductive prose and photo…such a great post. Sigh…

    September 7, 2013 at 12:23 am

  21. I read Just Another Love Story this morning and thought how beautiful. Now I read this and I’m like what do I say……except….can I lick your brain?

    September 7, 2013 at 9:58 am

    • Er…why evuls tho?!

      I appreciate the sentiment! Thank you!

      September 7, 2013 at 10:46 am

  22. I doff my hat..

    September 8, 2013 at 2:04 pm

  23. Choi! See poem … see pic! I gbadu your style of writing.

    September 14, 2013 at 7:38 am

  24. Yemie

    This is really creative depicting perfectly the whole seduction concept, I’m totally awed! The word play’s amazing! Was reveling in the rhythmic flow of this masterpiece till I got to the final two lines and I froze! You just had to throw in ‘her period’ didn’t you?! Gross! Lolz.

    June 25, 2014 at 7:10 pm

    • A question, madame! Blame your imagination.

      Thanks as always!

      June 25, 2014 at 7:12 pm

      • Yemie

        Sue me! Question or not, imagination notwithstanding, that right there’s a MAJOR dealbreaker! A spoiler! Oga Sir! *scoffing* LMAO!

        June 25, 2014 at 7:16 pm

      • Sorry madam!

        June 25, 2014 at 7:19 pm

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